Tuesday, 12 January 2016

He stopped. There was something behind him, something cold. Something not of this world.

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  1. Jake could see a massive shadow in front of him.

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  3. It was the poison pompom monster it's breath smelt like rotten cheese and onion crisps. It was revolting.

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  4. All Jake could hear was deep breathing behind him. all of a sudden the poison pompom monster took a deep breath and roared even louder than a lion.

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  5. All Jake could hear was deep breathing behind him. all of a sudden the poison pompom monster took a deep breath and roared even louder than a lion.

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  6. All Jake could hear was deep breathing behind him. All of a sudden the Poison Pompom monster roared even louder than a lion!

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  7. All Jake could hear was deep breathing behind him. All of a sudden the Poison Pompom monster roared even louder than a lion!

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  8. It was the worse time of his life.

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  9. All Jake could see was a massive monster with green dark eyes and smelt like moldy cheese!

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  10. it was a PIKACHU OF ULTIMATE DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM

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  11. he could tell that there was some wet slobber on his shoulder ... Jabberwocky loads and loads of them.
    what will Jake do next

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